Mmm, text has really bad placement, the render seems too oversharpened, EFX are okay. Lighting needs lots of work.
OK so I blur out the render a bit, and move the text. Should I make the lighting brightere? or darker?
the render is forced. you really didnt need that much of the render in the sig to pull off a sweet tag. you over sharpened the whole thing, and looks over contrasted. The lighting may actually be ok, but its hard to tell in the tags current state. text should be a bit closer to the focal as well, so the eyes are still drawn toward the focal, not searching all around. hope this helped a bit
