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  1. Pulse 666

    Pulse 666 Senior Member

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    Its just not going to work. I don't know what you're trying to show here, I'm guessing its a portfolio site.

    - I don't see how an island associates with design.
    - The font sucks.
    - The "portfolio" link is hovering in the sky and nowhere near the other links or information.
    - It doesn't say anything about what the website is.
    - You only got 3 links.
    - The island itself doesn't look good at all.


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    boobsmagee Well-Known Member

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    way to be a total dick as usual
    i thought the concept was cool,
    but portfolio link does need to be down farther
    and a few things could be better

    cool for the splash or w/e
    bottom could be cropped off
     
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    to put this simply love the idea just think you could have pulled it off better
     
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    Too much graphic tbh and remove your sig before someone makes a topic in the ripper section. And I am talking about the second one
     
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    When I get the chance going to move the portfolio to the back of the island and in that place put a flash text box/content area

    also, topic in the ripper section? if you want I will upload the psd's for my sigs, I always keep both.
    If someone has this sig then they have ripped it off me.
     
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    Sorry for double post. Updated...

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    The new one is way better. I was kind of wondering where your content was gonna go before... I really liked seeing the portfolio link in the sky though, that's the only one that was working for me. ^_^

    Home is still too hard to see. Maybe a different image in the lettering or turn the link into a giant KOI fish that pops up out of the water and spits the word out. Hehe
     
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    Like I said in my earlier post, its not going to work.

    I agree with Smarts, the "Home" link is hard to see, infact, all the links are hard to see.

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    Nuh uh... "services" is TOTALLY obvious. 1 out of however many there are is still bad, though. ;P
     
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    ThE DaRkSiD3 Well-Known Member

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    the new one looks pretty good tht could work
     
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    I like how this Has more views than My topics
    i like it gj man :) good idea
     
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    I like the idea. What have you done with it recently?
     

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