D A R K N

Here is my newest:



and here is just a random smudge that is pretty bad:



C/C is appreciated. Thanks.

 

Bump.

 

It's nice but text placement + lightening pretty random, not much depth, gj though

 

sig looks flat,and the lightning doesnt really work with it. looks unfinished
random smudge has potential,like the coloring and flow

 

not bad, I like the render.

 

Lightning is out of place. Good smudging. Text could use some work.

As said already the random smudge has potential.