Saskue Sig!

let me kno wot u think!!

 

i think its a bit too bright over the render, kind obscuring it from being the focus. instead ur text stand out more than it should imo

also, try something more complicated than a larger version of the render for the background, i suggest some tuts, its got good composition, i can tell you got good ideas, just need some more practice nice work

 

It's definately too bright and its a bit plain

 

focus point is aiming towards the sword ! the focus point should be on the character.

 

hehe cool, just render looked so cool at the beggining thats why i left it blank, but yeh i c thats its way T0o0 bright!! ty enweys!!