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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by DevilStrikz, Apr 17, 2008.

  1. DevilStrikz

    DevilStrikz Active Member

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    hey, i used to be nice at cs2 but stopped for like a year and i feel like trying it out again, i was just messing around and trying out stuff and i finally came up with this
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    plz rate, not the best ino but o well :lol:

    thnx
     
  2. Valeidascope

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    i dont like the maple leaf smudging, renders fairly large and text should be nearer the focal
     
  3. DevilStrikz

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    ok, thnx for your opinion, i want stuff like that cuz i want to learn more about cs2
     
  4. DevilStrikz

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    i made an edited one, not much different just changed a few things, maybe it'll work better, ya never know

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    The text should be where the flow starts, so it wont distract the viewer from the main point of the sig .
     
  6. DevilStrikz

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    thnx for ur comment
     
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    Good for a try.
    (Re)move the text. Make the c4ds opacity may a bit lower. Increase the lighting. Lower down the brightness of the render. Remove that smudging, instead add some more c4d renders for a nice flow. Remove the yellow dots and add white (small) ones going on from the light source.

    Thats what I would actually do.

    But it is really nice as an attempt.
     
  8. DevilStrikz

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    thnx dude, ill try that
     
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    looks great to me, some people are just too fusy when it comes to a signature. I think it looks very nice. Although constructive critism is good. Good luck for the future aswell!
     
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    The maple stuff is kinda bad
    The yellow light things are too strong
    Try blending the colors more/add more adjustment layers
    Save your tags as .PNG not .GIF
     
  11. DevilStrikz

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    thnx future and vengeance, but vengeance, why is it better to save as .PNG not .GIF? :huh:
     
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    Light didn't too good, did you set it to liner dodge? C4d, same, did you set it to liner dodge or screen/lighten?

    Not bad for first sig in long time..

    PNG save better quality, GIF make it low quality and its made for movement image.
     
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    i agreee w/ white girl
     
  14. DevilStrikz

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    lol, i actually cant remember :tongue:

    and everyone thnx for ur comments
     

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