Looks good, I especially like the coloring. Also the text is pulling a lot away from the focal as the white 'S' is very bright and pulls attention away. I'd personally scrap the text and do something a little more with the background.
Apart from there being no depth and the render not standing out enough...I reckon it's awesome. Sharpen and blur out background and it should be sweet. Or do your own depth and standoutedness (Right...)
