Remove the text, add more colors, use some gradient maps and warming filters, and most improtantly add some C4D effects to bring out the focal and make it look cool. Keep it up, you have some potential here!
Too bright on the left - Add some more gradients from the render's color and it should flow nicely. Txt is ok. Looks good overall, nicely smudged.
Hey guys, thnx for the comments, i was playing around with gradiants and this popped up, really liked it