hm the first one is oke, i think the colors dont go with the render. and the text doesnt go well.. the 2nd one is oke a bit too much smudge..and i just dont like the pink bits sry but with a bit of work they could look very nice!!
k, on the first one, i used colours from my render 0.o true the text isn't good, thats why i needed C&C on the second one i didn't use 1 single smudge brush, all filters + c4d. tnx for C&C