Csi Miami

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  1. FATA

    FATA Well-Known Member

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    check it out, let me know what you think :D
     
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    I like the colors ^_^ although a bit too much white space. I'd change the text too, not feeling the red text. Maybe use a blue or yellow. You cut his head off too early too. Good job though ^_^
     
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    I tried the miami with the light blue/cyan and i just didn't really like it, i'll try out the yellow
    and about the white space, i didn't know what to do there =(
     
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    Tag is sorta long, you can cut off a little on the sides and expand your effects ^_^ Good luck with it.
     
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    Alright, here's V2
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    Better or worse?
     
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    Could have left it a little longer then that. The miami text color is much better, but i'd change the font, something simple, sans serif (spelling) font or something ^_^ Get rid of that one effect thats overlaping his face, looks like a grass brush or something, i'd just scratch that, not helping it.
     
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    V3
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    no more grass in the face (that was the grass brush)
    high five material?
     
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    I like the colours that you used, it fits really well, but you should do something about the white space.
     
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    The new versions are good none the less, but I think v1 would of been fine, all you had to do was crop some of the white out if you wanted to. V3 looks better than v2 though.

    only other thing is the head being cut off where it is. good work other wise
     
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    tbh i really like the first version better then the rest.. yes u could do a little more with it but the white space just give it a really nice layout to go with the colours.
     
  11. I agree that his head was cut off too early, and that the light next to his head on the right is a bit strong. The text is a bit strong and almost becomes your focal, so try lowering the opacity or using brighter, less visible colors. People are having a lot of trouble with depth; Try using more effects in perspective to show depth as well as the burn/dodge tool in certain places. The random pen tool/ pencil lines don't really help and sort of kill the sig. When I use the pencil tool, I make a line in a new layer and set it to Ripple on 999% usually with small/medium strokes.
     

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