Sky Eats Airplane

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by target_practice, Apr 14, 2008.

  1. Apr 14, 2008 at 3:06 PM #1
    target_practice

    target_practice Well-Known Member

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    V1:
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  2. Apr 14, 2008 at 4:09 PM #2
    P h o e n i X

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    This sig is very messy and has practically no focal... I love the effects, but the contrast and disorganization of the sig kills it...
     
  3. Apr 14, 2008 at 4:22 PM #3
    mjsmile

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    yeah it's too messy!

    remove the disorganisation and it will be a great sig!

    Keep working on it mate : )
     
  4. Apr 14, 2008 at 4:24 PM #4
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    Version one is in my opinion better, I find that because of colour use, which of course the black and white one does not have!
     
  5. Apr 14, 2008 at 5:32 PM #5
    target_practice

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    [​IMG]

    Redid the sig, made it a little cleaner and played with the colors.
     
  6. Apr 14, 2008 at 5:44 PM #6
    Zohair

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    The new one is much better but you seriously need to work on your text skills bro! :)

    Other than that, its great. :)
     
  7. Apr 14, 2008 at 5:47 PM #7
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    ----, i tought it was a sprite >_< .

    I love the effects, but the render is too blended, as i couldnt figure it before. You need to work on coloring an text .
     
  8. Apr 14, 2008 at 7:11 PM #8
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    Nice tag. Hard to see the focal.

    Text needs slight work.

    Kickass band too.
     
  9. Apr 14, 2008 at 8:55 PM #9
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    Hit it smack dab on the head.
    The effects are definitely rad, but composition is lacking. :(
     

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