ok, thanks for the comments. I actually had more effects in, but it looked kinda distracting, so i erased some effects... I'll try that lighting idea. v2 is up! I fixed the lighting a little.
its better but change the text from that hideous font, search on DeviantArt for a font called Simplistic, it could look better here
Lose the border, darken it at all with curves and lower the opacity of the font. Then it should be alright.
as said above, the border can go..it ruins the flow of the tag. The new font looks good, nice job overall
ok thanks. I didn't really get why I should get rid of the border. But your explanation makes sense. and v4 is up.
tag is good, but maybe try different font styles with each line, maybe gradients or something different..good work!