~ Bleach ~

Anyway, I think I've improved my text a lot from before...

v2


v3


v4

Comments & Criticism?

 

It's alright, but needs something to spice it up. Also, I think the text should be changed.

 

render could be blended in a bit more nice effects to could use a little more

 

I forgot to mention that I really like the use of c4d.

 

Maybe improve the light source a bit?
Like omni / spot light? Could work well.

 

ok, thanks for the comments.

I actually had more effects in, but it looked kinda distracting, so i erased some effects...

I'll try that lighting idea.

v2 is up! I fixed the lighting a little.

 

its better but change the text from that hideous font, search on DeviantArt for a font called Simplistic, it could look better here

 

ok, lemme try that.

v3 is up!

 

lose the border

 

Lose the border, darken it at all with curves and lower the opacity of the font. Then it should be alright.

 

Ok, i'll definitely try that.

v4 is up now.

 

as said above, the border can go..it ruins the flow of the tag. The new font looks good, nice job overall

 

ok thanks. I didn't really get why I should get rid of the border. But your explanation makes sense.

and v4 is up.

 

tag is good, but maybe try different font styles with each line, maybe gradients or something different..good work!

 

Thanks for the comment.

Always need to improve my text :tongue: <_<