Death Note Tag

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Crimson Thunder, Apr 11, 2008.

  1. Apr 11, 2008 at 12:08 AM #1
    Crimson Thunder

    Crimson Thunder Well-Known Member

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    Hi everyone. Here's my new tag.. As i think i'm not improving much. What do u guys think??
    I think i oversharpened the girls face..

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  2. Apr 11, 2008 at 12:10 AM #2
    HOLLAstir

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    Left side looks good. Although not feeling the duel focals or the text. I'd get rid of the right focal and focus on effects similar to the left. Good job though ^_^
     
  3. Apr 11, 2008 at 1:11 AM #3
    Master Pride

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    The double character idea is a mega fail. But the left side looks sick.
     
  4. Apr 11, 2008 at 5:10 AM #4
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    This tag needs smthing. i dont know what :(
     
  5. Apr 11, 2008 at 7:04 AM #5
    Strykor

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    Blur the right side a bit, maybe it turns out good. So that the focal is really on the woman. It could need some better flow.
     
  6. Apr 11, 2008 at 1:01 PM #6
    Crimson Thunder

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    Got nothing to say to u guys except thanks for critics... I'll try my best to improve myself ....
     

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