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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Samurai-JM, Apr 10, 2008.

  1. Apr 10, 2008 at 12:23 PM #1
    Samurai-JM

    Samurai-JM Well-Known Member

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    v1:[​IMG]

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    removed the c4d on the left, it was a bit obstrusive. put a light source in its place and added a bit more effect detail around the render.

    C&C is great :rofl:
     
  2. Apr 10, 2008 at 1:44 PM #2
    3mpireAAR

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    dont like the mosaic thing, even with opacity low it doesnt suit it,
    nd try smudging the render a little coz i think it would suit effects better XD
     
  3. Apr 10, 2008 at 1:49 PM #3
    Strykor

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    It just fits the style, nice done.
    The render is a bit too bright, you have to decide where the light comes from, from the left or from the right (or from the viewer but then your flow is weird). Burn the part where the lighting is not.
     
  4. Apr 10, 2008 at 2:07 PM #4
    Samurai-JM

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    thx for input guys :D I made a 2nd version with a little retouching, seems a bit better now.
     
  5. Apr 10, 2008 at 5:11 PM #5
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    v2 minus the text, or use v1 text. I agree that the render is a little too bright. good job overall
     

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