Precision - Serenity

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .Serenity., Apr 8, 2008.

  1. .Serenity.

    .Serenity. Senior Member

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    Been taking the advice of people here and working with tutorials after my break from tag making.

    What you guys think of this?

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    All comments are welcome, thanks :)
     
  2. TAD. Zolo

    TAD. Zolo Well-Known Member

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    Background is kind of messy, and needs a flow and some depth. Improvement though, I can see it. Just keep looking up different ideas and tuts and psd's. Learn the way of the people xD.
     
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    Hey, it's not bad.

    But look at the two sides. To the right of the girl, it's busier and there's a lot more going on. On the other side it looks kind of like the clouds effect, but sharpened (kind of, not exactly). It's just like an inconsistency and I don't know if you were going for something there, but it seems kind of awkward.

    It also seems really flat.

    I think it looks pretty cool, though, it looks better than a lot of stuff I make, lol.

    Keep plugging away, you've got potential! =D
     
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    I totally agree.
    The improvement is there, keep practicing and you get back at where you were.
     
  5. .Serenity.

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    Hey all, thanx for the comments, really appreciate them. :)
     

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