ver2: just tried somethni idk UPDATE: which is better? what to add? remove? what do you like? dislike? thanks
Grimmmmijow!!! Bleach omg. Well lets see. The background is a bit strange couz of the strange blueish coloring there. It does not really fit with the original bg, thats why it looks a bit werd. The focal is pretty nice but the text is still too much distracting. There is nothing really going on, add some effects maybe.
I think its a little bit overdone as far as the background goes...especially the "fog"ish looking stuff. Background just looks random and over-blurred, which doesn't allow the render to be blended well. The text is meh as well, I'd completely start over, the render has potential, I think trying to fit it into a background and blend it more would produce a nicer result.