ok this is my first sig and i would like to know what peep's think.I used pic number 5 from the Fable render pack which i found in the forum's (nice work to who ever cut the render)
I kinda like the colors and flow, although you've hidden the stock so much it took me a while to work our what it was and where it was. Other than that, good job for your first tag!
Ok! ^_^ Well, since this is your first, you cannot expect it to be great. Right now, it doesn't look very good. But practice and good CnC will change that right up. Okay, First, the render is too large. You should resize it and make it smaller. That way the focul point is proportional to to the size of the sig. next, your focul point should be clean. With too many effects on it, a focul point loses it's sparkle. ^_^ Also, there's just "too much" going on. You know, it's like too hectic. There should be more structure in the tag. Too many lil' lights. :lol: But, the good thing is, you've started! ^_^ It's the hardest part imo. ^_^ So once your on your way and making strides in techniques and stuff, your past the big hill. Your flow was good, but lighting, focul point, depth and lot's of other stuff is lacking (to be expected from someone just getting started. ) So look up some tuts and get crackin'! keep posting stuff and keep getting it CnCed! And if peeps are mean, just let it roll. Keep it up! And welcome to the wonderful world of GFX!
Agreed what mr Hoplite Said (very Nice of you BTW!!) Always keep the focal Clean Would make the tag alot better gj for your first,, read some Tuts KeepitUp!
thank you so much for your input and i will look at some changers and when i have read a few tut's and other info i will re post my next one
Thats the right attitude. Anyways, welcome to the forums, I do not have much more to say, Hop said it all. Work on your lighting / depth / color, the flow is pretty nice. To make a great depth, the render has to be a bit smaller than your one, as hop said. Just do that the next time.
ok peep's i'm back with a new pic and i tried a different style please let me know what you think and what i could do to improve my work
1st tag Damn, i didnt see that render/stock. Remove the face and u will get some abstract tag Mario Well. the render size sux. the text sux also but u will improve. just read tuts
