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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .Arkane, Apr 6, 2008.

  1. Apr 6, 2008 at 6:10 PM #1
    .Arkane

    .Arkane Well-Known Member

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    first in a while, messed around with distort
     
  2. Apr 6, 2008 at 6:20 PM #2
    TAD. Zolo

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    Try and fix that blurry light in the bottom right. Text seems okay. Effects are pretty nice, and depth is okay too, try to add some more though.
     
  3. Apr 6, 2008 at 8:17 PM #3
    Kiyaa

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    Love the left side. Good job.
     
  4. Apr 7, 2008 at 12:45 AM #4
    .Arkane

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    thanks. i suppose i tried to make the right a sort of lighting thing. didnt really work as i wanted it to
     
  5. Apr 7, 2008 at 11:46 AM #5
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    omg your current is great
     
  6. Apr 7, 2008 at 12:52 PM #6
    Strykor

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    Your current is way better. ;)

    The lighting seems a bit forced and the text is not really at the right place, it distracts from the focal point.
    Work a bit on your lighting, improve it with C4Ds or omni / spotlights.
    Anyways the render seems a bit LQ.
     

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