Drained Away

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  1. Apr 6, 2008 at 3:44 PM #1
    Sock

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    <strike>Not much to say about this one except it sucks:</strike> Here it is, and this statement is very not self-depreciative now =D:

    V1: [​IMG]

    V2: [​IMG]

    V3: [​IMG]

    Comments and Criticism please.
     
  2. Apr 6, 2008 at 5:56 PM #2
    Sock

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    I hear the sound of a hearbeat...

    baBUMP, baBUMP, baBUMP.
     
  3. Apr 6, 2008 at 6:24 PM #3
    TAD. Zolo

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    Looks nice, just the text kinda messes up that area right there.
     
  4. Apr 6, 2008 at 7:13 PM #4
    Sock

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    Consider it (re)moved.
     
  5. Apr 6, 2008 at 8:25 PM #5
    Sock

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    Well, eventually it wil be, I'm just really lazy.
     
  6. Apr 6, 2008 at 9:16 PM #6
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    I'd use the burn tool on the side; it'd make it more interesting. Great job :)
     
  7. Apr 6, 2008 at 9:41 PM #7
    Sock

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    So axe the text and burn the sides.

    Noted and will be done, thanks everyone. =D

    Keep 'em coming, everyone! (I hope I can one day reach your skill-level, Kiyaa).
     
  8. Apr 6, 2008 at 9:43 PM #8
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    only thing is the text other than that it is quite tranquill
     
  9. Apr 6, 2008 at 9:52 PM #9
    Sock

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    Suggestions completed. Anything else?

    (Thanks to everyone who's posted so far).
     
  10. Apr 6, 2008 at 11:09 PM #10
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    V2 is definitely better. I'd upper the contrast a bit, though.
     
  11. Apr 6, 2008 at 11:42 PM #11
    Kiyaa

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    V2 is much better. Great job :)
     
  12. Apr 6, 2008 at 11:54 PM #12
    Sock

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    Okay, a third version up with the contrast risen a bit, following FFX's advice.

    Thanks, everyone! =D

    Is there anything else anyone has to say about this?
     
  13. Apr 7, 2008 at 1:29 PM #13
    Strykor

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    I just think it is awesome!
    V2, really really nice lighting / depth!
     
  14. Apr 7, 2008 at 6:21 PM #14
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    Hmm for starters dont be self deprecated haha personally thats a pet-peeve of mine, at least try and be confident in everything you do :P
    And for good reason I really like this one haha

    I think text would be appropriate if you could find something that really described the picture, I mean you got room, paradise, twilight, etc. simple yet sexy :]

    My favorite is V3 I think it really hits the mark, But I also think a border may tie the whole thing together as well, but maybe thats just my style?
    Anyways the only thing that really bugs me in the entire signature is the dark line outlining Saturn if it were me I would at least test and see what happens if you try blending or blurring it out

    Great job I love it :]
     
  15. Apr 7, 2008 at 7:07 PM #15
    Sock

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    Thanks, everyone! =D

    What would you suggest for a border? I've kind of turned this one into a project, lol. I'm just wondering because usually I just use a 1px black border, and I haven't really moved beyond that. Any idea what would be appropriate for this one?

    (I'll also experiment with the outline of Saturn).
     

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