Its A Start

less sharpened

v3

i think im getting better

 

I like the coloring, a little grainy in the background...over sharpened perhaps? Render seems to be blended well. It looks good, and if you feel its an improvement over previous work, then you're in the correct direction.

 

Not bad, I like the coloring too =]

 

BG looks still grainy,, but it like it
Colours are great and it attracts me somehow,, it's a cool render and is used very well
gj

 

It is nice but still a bit overcontrasted, fix that and it will look nice.

 

i think the grainyness was from the spatter id have to look again not on my computer =/

 

Colors are nice, and less sharpened seems a bit better. Seems like grainy in spots, and I think there needs to be more depth. It's nice though, just needs a few touch ups here and there.

 

I like it. The sig overall really fits the render used.