Version 2 ( attempted to take out the lines): I hate those lines on the render... that go across and vertically.. But they were part of the stock and i have no idea how to take them off T_T" Anyways, I didnt use any c4ds.. for those who think i did. lol.
Generally, if I notice something that I don't like on a render, I just use the healing brush and manually fix with the pencil and/or brush. It takes a while, but it looks like you recovered beautifully. There's amazing depth there, and the colours work really well. If I were you, I would burn the top left corner just to kid of match the other side. It looks awkward with the burn only on one side. Pretty much awesome! (I might be willing to collab with you sometime. I've never done one, though).
Thanks And yeah, the game was great ...but i sucked and could never beat the second form of the last boss.. haha.
In the game you should abuse the stadium place to become really powerful. It's cheap, but it works. =D