~collapse-faiien

made another one...yay...lol

 

The white brushing and such kills it...especially the large white splatter...totally pulls the eye away from the focal. Everything else seems ace...well done.

 

I love the big canvas, I just agree with what Shrouded said and that splatter totally kills the sig.


also, why do you never respond on msn?

 

Add a clipping mask the the splatter and it could look pretty nice.

 

Agreed with them Do A Clipping mask on those splatters
gj you both

 

edited, thx for the responses guys

 

the white bar thing kills it imo. otherwise it looks pretty good

 

i would get rid of that but it adds alot of depth to the sig and some color, thx for the comment

 

As the other(s) have said, those white lines kind of destroy it. With a C. Mask it'll look great I think..

 

thx for the comment, edited one last time...mayb