Sora Sig

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  1. Apr 5, 2008 at 10:14 PM #1
    black_mist

    black_mist Well-Known Member

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    Couple new ones..maybe not as good as before cuz I got grounded from computer for a couple days..so here ya'll go!

    Sora

    V.1

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    V.2 (B&W)

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    C&C Please :)
     
  2. Apr 5, 2008 at 10:15 PM #2
    TAD. Zolo

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    Kinda of bright on the left. Try and work on the depth too, try blurring some part of the background and sharpening parts around the focal.
     
  3. Apr 5, 2008 at 11:17 PM #3
    black_mist

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    Alright like I said, I just started back up on PS from being grounded so it might be a bit before I get used to it again..

    Thanks tho :)
     
  4. Apr 5, 2008 at 11:19 PM #4
    cheatsmaster

    cheatsmaster Gotta Catch 'Em All!

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    Yeah it need depth. :D Sharpening and blurring can help you. Also add a little more colors and effects. :D And why not a text? :D
     
  5. Apr 5, 2008 at 11:24 PM #5
    black_mist

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    About the text...Not very good at it yet haha... So I am doing some work on it
     
  6. Apr 5, 2008 at 11:52 PM #6
    Darkmane

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    Looks like you have a purple to orange gradient map, doesn't look to good. Makes it look washed out.
     
  7. Apr 6, 2008 at 12:23 AM #7
    black_mist

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    Hmm maybe don't really remember what I put in it haha
     
  8. Apr 6, 2008 at 8:19 AM #8
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    Sharpen and blur parts,, would look better
    And add some nice gradients to make coloring better
    B/W looks best
    gj
     
  9. Apr 6, 2008 at 8:46 AM #9
    Strykor

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    Add some darkening curves to it.
    Improve the focal by burning / blurring (the C4Ds maybe too, they look a bit sharp) the outsides.
    The background does not really fit I guess, it looks a bit strange with that chain.
     

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