Manic Depression

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Sock, Apr 5, 2008.

  1. Sock

    Sock Well-Known Member

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    It's been a really long time since I've done anything, and this one I decided I'd try something way different from anything I've ever done. I tried to create something with a lot of contrast and a dark theme.

    I'm trying to figure out how to make this better, I've got ideas, but I'd like more input before I move on.

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    New version:

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    I don't think it's bad considering that I've been away from this sort of thing for a long time now.
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    So here's a new sig I spent some time on. I'm considering making it into a tutorial if there proves to be enough interest.

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    I'm aware the change is tacky, and I hae some alternatives, but I'd rather not do them. C&C and if you're interested in seeing a tutorial on this, please tell me.
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    And another one, this one isn't a dark theme, it's more of just a picture than a signature. It's kind of a shout-out to the artists around the dawning of photography.
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    C&C, please. This one was very experimental. (Ugh, can't wait for the "no fohkawl" comments).
     
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    What is your focal actually?
    If the bird should be, blur the building in the bg more.
    If not, then blur the bird itself a bit more so you create some better depth.
    The flow is pretty nice.
     
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    Work on the colours, nothing seems to fit which throughs out the balance in the image.
     
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    The whole purpose was for it not to fit.

    I editted the above to try and do some of what you guys said,t hough.

    Any better, any worse?
     
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    I find verison 1 better.

    I find its a very nice sig, I woudlnt change a thing. But thats just me :P
     
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    v1 looks good to me the focal is clearly the bird i would say add more but idk what that would be
     
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    Oh wow, now there's a lot of varying opinions o_O.

    *Has no idea where to go from here =( *
     
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    Added a new sig, I'm placing more importance on it now. If you would like to see a tutorial on it, please tell me, because I'm thinking about making one for it.

    C&C very much appreciated!
     
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    To comment on the tag you first posted, as many others said, it's kinda needs a focal point (at least when I look at it, I can't find a place to focus on, like that parrot). It kinda has two focals, both the parrot and the building.


    On the other one, it's a very nice idea, and the message is pretty much damn accurate.
     
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    I'm still tweaking that first one to try and figure out how I can create my proper focus. I want it to be on the parrot, but I do know I want people to see the direction it's heading. I find that my eye kind of looks all over it, too, so I definately know what you guys mean. Maybe if I took the lightsource behind the bird...

    Ok I think I can figure that one out.

    And does anyone have anything else to say about my second one?
     
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    Bumpdeebump.
     
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    Are my signatures really so horrible they don't even warrant any C&C?

    =(
     
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    I think it is better, but the techniques used for lighting dont suit the style.
     
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    You mean for the parrot one?
     
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    Bump, added a new sig.
     

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