My 2nd Stock Tag

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  1. Apr 4, 2008 at 2:56 PM #1
    Strykor

    Strykor Well-Known Member

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    CnC please.
     
  2. Apr 4, 2008 at 3:08 PM #2
    Darkmane

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    The stock is cut to high, so its just a head, when you crop a tag, or place a stock, be sure you can see more than the bottom of there neck or it looks really weird, like theres a floating head.
    Also, the colors are muddy, and murky. Makes the whole tag look lq.
     
  3. Apr 4, 2008 at 3:29 PM #3
    HOLLAstir

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    Floating head syndrome. Good flow, although i'm not really feeling the colors or the text on this one. Sorry bro, don't really like it <3 Keep at it.
     
  4. Apr 4, 2008 at 3:33 PM #4
    Strykor

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    Okay thanks so far, since it is my second one, I am still improving from one to the other greatly.

    //Edit: Added a bw version.
     
  5. Apr 4, 2008 at 3:33 PM #5
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    All he said, and the text .

    That kind of text is over used, and add some borders .
     
  6. Apr 4, 2008 at 3:42 PM #6
    Strykor

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    Okay, thanks guys, any further comments maybe on the b/w one?
     
  7. Apr 4, 2008 at 4:18 PM #7
    Darkmane

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    Yeah, Its black and white. There isn't anything different. You applied one layer to it.
     
  8. Apr 4, 2008 at 4:59 PM #8
    Strykor

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    Lol, I know, I just wanted to know wether it is better because you said the colors were mudy. >.>

    So I thought adding a bw version would be a good idea since there are no colors. :&
     
  9. Apr 5, 2008 at 3:48 AM #9
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    Agreed With ABove
    Not really Liking it ... :s
     

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