it's a simple tag. sue me. going for a superbly simple tag with this one. DOES IT APPEAL TO YOU? CONCEPT: BEING ALONE. IT'S NOT SUPPOSED TO HAVE "SHINY" EFFECTS FLYING ALL OVER AND SPLATTER BRUSH HERE AND THERE!
I kind of see what you're doing here...but meh...you're gonna get tons of "where the focal lul" and "needs effectz lawl". The positioning of the image works well with the flow...so yes...its somewhat appealing.
Too much dead space, really... Nothing going on there, add effects, colors, splatter brushes maybe...
The concept is good and you captured it pretty well, but with the concept you established, you might've wanted to make it a bit darker.