Phoenix

This took me a while to do...CC..plz



I tried to get rid of some of that white and sharpened the focal point a bit ... CC
V2

 

very nice Too much white space though

 

Nice one, smoothy, good flow, I like it.
Some more effects at the left will not ruin it.

 

ty.. Ya I rlry could not think of anything to add to it to get rid of some of that white space..but I'll go back in and see what I can do.

 

The flow is nice its busy by the render but i think there is too much white space left

 

V2 up... I think its a bit messy..

 

V2 is slightly better.

Good work.

 

ty

 

You could add some text on the left to fill it up.

and v2 looks better, but kinda oversharpened in some places.

 

ty... I was thinking bout adding some text,still looking for one that fits it

 

By adding some light grey to the white space, you could fill some in, and still keep that white space feeling. Just don't add splatters, but add like, weird shapes. Maybe some smudging with the leaf brush.

 

TY

 

Agreed about the whit space and it also looks a bit messy in the right upper corner (Or that's perhaps the render)
Nice flow Tho
V2 is best
gj

 

ty

 

Really nice, but as said before, to much white spots.