Haruhi Suzumiya

V.2


This didn't come out how I planned but I still like it.40 layers of fun, most of which are c4d lol.

 

The render is too bright.
There is no real depth and the text is a bit hard to read.
Anyways good job, the colors are nice.

 

lol, doesn't sound like I did a good job.Text Isn't supposed to be super noticeable anyway though, It's just my screen name.

 

It looks pretty good.

I think you need to erase... the yellow part on the far left; blue next to the end of the microphone; and the c4d to the right of the head looks kinda distracting, but it somewhat works.

And yes, the render is too bright and contrasted. it hurts my eyes.

 

I posted a less bright v.2

 

Yeah, i like v2 more.

You should really erase some parts of the c4ds though.

 

a bit
bright on the render, otherwise tight ^_^ nice work

 

By the way guys the stock is actually pretty much that bright on V.2