Gift To Little Lightning

I hope it gets some feedback here :x

 

Nice lighting, good light source. The background is a bit too sharp for me. Blur it a bit more.

 

I don't like the colors or flow
The focal's split between the left and right side, and the depth is there but it's really shady and unclear.
bottom lighting has got to go >.>
overall, not bad =]

 

work on colors / light and focal.
2 light sources. this is bad.
3 focals .. this is really bad.

 

Anyone care to enlighten my where the third light source is ? Because i had a point when i made two of them .

Also, i blurred the background twice and sharpened some areas around the girl softly .

The flow is meant to be bottom right -> upper left .

Thanks for the feed : D

 

i said 2 light sources / 3 focals. not 3 light sources

 

So i got 3 focals too ?

 

yeah .. the first focal is the light with the text
second focal - the girl
third focal - the c4d [or whateva is that ] from the left.

 

then your flow is bad

yup yup

 

Agreed with them
Work on those things.
But I like it overall,, it attracts me.
gj

 

I know it isn't the same old sig everyone does, thats why i tried to innovate.

I also added the right c4d to take the view off from the bright lights.

There's more to a tag than a focal, a light source, a render and a flow. The first time you saw this one, you probably looked from left to right. That's what i meant by it. Still, i will try to improve the things you said i should.

Thanks for all feedback .

 

Little over the top on the center light source, it breaks up the sharp back ground effects well but is still to strong.

Nice over all keep up the GW.