Oversharpened a bit. The lighting is good, the flow too. Nice style that you have, the compo is pretty nice. The right side seems a bit too different from the left and over the render there is a bit too much, erase some of those clipping masks or what those are, not many, just a few. The upper right corner seems a bit strange in the colored version, it distracts the attention from the focal. Change it, blur it or whatever a bit. I pretty like it. ;D Btw. the colored version is very! better than the bw.
thanks for the cnc and yep its kinda sharpend and i think if i blured that feeling of the sig will go away anyways thanks for the reply
This one doesn't really do it for me, the colors seem very blah, and it just seems too busy overall. Your other work is much better IMO.