Looks great to me. But work on the colors. Maybe orange, with a span to a cooler color, try some different color combinations.
nice but it looks really lq to me. but other than that it looks pretty cool. i like the coloured version. GJ dude!!!
Nice, COLOUR FTW. Watch your text... seems off? eh. Maybe soften the face up? add a small blur and erase the bk/ground or even revers erase the focus ... would help the focus stand out more but it will remain over sharpend.