I made these two yesterday and today. I know the typo is kind of stupid and sucks in the first one, but...yeah. CnC
They are both oversharpened and overcontrasted. The downer one has a pretty good flow, would like some more color on that one, the depth is not very nice but not very bad, blur the bg a bit more and it will get going. 6.5/10 The upper one has a nice compo but I am not really feeling it, if you do a signature like that, I would let the background white or so and just add a shadow but there is a bit too much. (distracting from the focal) Anyways it could need a bit better lighting. 7/10 Keep up the work.