lots of dead space you could add to the effects a bit imo, but you could leave it as is and have it be a simpler tag what you got looks great tho, good work
i like the flow but yeah -- its negative space .. and lots of it...maybe u could add some texture to the background
You can make that -space work. All you gotta do is bring the effects out a bit wider and smudge a bit more. Make it fold around her n' stuff. Just keep working a tag with empty space untill you've got enough going on to give it some character. Good though, just needs a little more ^_^