Best Tag Ever Me Thinks.

C&C please.



EDIT:

BW VERSION Since so many requested

 

its cool but you could work on your depth a little bit, otherwise the render's face seems a bit bright/lacking (wheres his mouth?) but i think its good nice effects

 

The clipping masks seem to have white around them that shouldn't be there? That's weird. ::scratches head::

Also, work on the depth, hun. It's really flat. You also need to create a clearer focal point and make the bg and effects at least play off of each other so the switch from the bg to the effects isn't so abrupt. Flow would be especially good.

The random negative space on the right throws it off as well, and I can't see the facial details. Sorry.

Keep working on it. It's a nice start, hun.

 

No clipping mask it was smudging and as for the rest of your suggestions thanks ill work on the tag a little more later for now i have to go lol.

 

Then what are the circles that look like clipping masks/clone stamps?

 

smudging with a splatter brush.

 

I like the sig.

 

I really want to see a BW version personally.

 

I think it would look better as bw. The color version isn't really working for me. I like the techniques you used though.

 

Add a b/w for try please.

The flow is good, the depth is bad.

Work on depth and lighting.

 

Ok added the BW version but I think BW makes it look worse lol.

 

I think BW is better personally.

 

Effects are okay, but don't like the green to red/orange.