My First Abstract

What do you think?
CnC please.

 

Hmm... Interesting. But it lacks a defined focul point. Also, the color
choices aren't working imo.
It looks like you could really get something going with it though. I just
think you could've done a better job on the composition. Like building the
tag around a certain theme instead of just streaks, know what I mean?

It seems like it was good practice though. I think everyone's first few abstract
pieces are a bit rough, then you tighten up your style.

Keep at it bro. ^_^

 

Thank you, I will try to work on that.

Any further comments maybe?

 

try to blend it in, it looks like the "effect" has a stroke on overlay...

 

Ok I wil try

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I just used one C4D and many filters to create that, no other things.


//Edit: I keep having problems with the compo, any tutorials on that or tips?