haha i made this just for fun ! I just bought SSBB and in celebration I made a sig of one of my fave characters !! WEEE !!! ok so here it is !! MY TEXT ISN't HORRIBLE * claps for self * weoeoeooooeee !
Imo, the focul is very weak. Also the smudging feels very undefined. It doesn't look as good as your currents, but I think if you tightened up some stuff, it'd be pretty cool.
Needs some improvement here and there but I pretty like it. Strengthen the focal, sharpen it, burn a bit around and it should look nice.
I was kinda in a rush when i made this sig -- haha little details .. yeah i will sharpen. It got smudged along with the background a bit... forgot to sharpen. i used a good tut in the paid tut secftion. It is really good tut with lots of techniques -- i forgot it's name..... lmao Advertising FTW !
The typo is much better than past typos. Try to define your focal a bit more and the depth could use a little work. Sharpen the render up, maybe sharpen the effects around her a SMIDGE, not a lot. Also, I think a light source, and some bg burning would do nicely in this situation.
