Ipod Theme

Ok, i was watching some of those old I-Pod adverts the black & white ones and i was inspired ^^.

It may not be that great, but i had fun making it ^^.

All CnC welcome.

Edit: Ive added the Greyscale version.

 

Don't take my advice cause I am a noob, but the black and white doesn't really fit the red background. Looks kinda off.

 

Ye i know, but i couldnt think of how to blend pure black&white with colour and still make it stand out, hmm maybe this

 

Yea looks better (I don't like colours too much anyways.)

 

its nice and simple! The cut on the headphones is really good. background is kinda oversaturated a bit --
maybe you could add a bit more flow maybe

 

Needs flow, but good concept.

 

Thanks for the comments guys, i might go back and rework it later ^^.

 

I think it's a good start. But it didn't turn out quite as good as it could've.
Flow is hurting in this one.

I think what's hurting this tag the most is the fact that you have a simple render with a
totally different style background. If you're using sillouhette (i don't think I spelled that right. lol)
renders, try to use that style as a guide for your BGs and effects.
Like the left side looks much better than the right side, because it's a bit more simple.
Use big flowy swashes and sparkly things, and dots and stuff rather than a grunge background .

Hope that helps. ^_^

 

Anyways the contrast in the first one is too high.