Beauty

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by bry5012, Mar 31, 2008.

  1. Mar 31, 2008 at 9:48 AM #1
    bry5012

    bry5012 Well-Known Member

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    not my best work as I was trying something new....what do you all think?

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    V2
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    I added V2 with some changes. added a light source, a little more flowers on the left and my name
     
  2. Mar 31, 2008 at 10:24 AM #2
    Strykor

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    The second version is better, I like it more.
    The d epth / flow is pretty good.
    The text is a bit distracting, I would remove it at all.
     
  3. Mar 31, 2008 at 10:25 AM #3
    bry5012

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    thank you Strykor
     
  4. Mar 31, 2008 at 11:09 AM #4
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    the colors are good .
    needs some depth.
    text cud be improved
     
  5. Mar 31, 2008 at 11:29 AM #5
    bry5012

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    than you Daedlus
     
  6. Mar 31, 2008 at 11:50 AM #6
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    Needs a bit more depth and I think you should get rid of the flower sin the top corners. They're distracting imo. Good work overall. ^_^
     
  7. Mar 31, 2008 at 6:16 PM #7
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    Not feeling the background. It almost feels like a grunge style so it doesn't seem to fit the focal and the flowers.
     
  8. Apr 1, 2008 at 9:31 AM #8
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    thank you Kiyaa and Eternal...i can only try to improve....!!
     

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