How Can I Improve This Signature?

Ok, so i followed a tutorial on this website and came out with this:

Please can you tell me good and bad things about it and ways to improve
Thanks in advance

 

Start the changing with the text. The font doesn't fit. Sometimes that font looks good but set antialiasing on none or sharp then and not on smooth, as it is now.

 

1.Add some c4d.
2.Remove/change text.
3.Remove the border.
4.Dont use those shapes or w/e.
5.Dont try everything to be the same color.
6.Dont try ur result to look like the tutorials result, be unique.

 

Lol firstly, thanks for the replies
what kind of c4d should i add?
what shapes are you talking about?
But ill do the other things like remove border text ect and post that one
thanks for replies and keep them coming

 

Take out the oversharpened brushes.
His hand is oversharpened
Try creating flow with C4Ds
Take out the kanji and text, they don't fit mario
work on the depth and focal point.
Read more tutorials.

 

Ok, so i have done the things you guys have told me to do
I removed things like the big dragon and added some more small stuff
I played around with some C4Ds and this i swhat i have some up with:

This one is without any C4Ds:


This one has 3 C4Ds in but on low opacity:


Which one is better and why
I am still looking for ways to improve so feel free to suggest
Also if anyone has any suggestions about which text i should use please post it

 

It's slightly better. Take out all of the kanji. All of it. Take out that white blob in the middle of the tag too. Try to do some work with C4Ds and make it look like they're shooting from his hand or something.

The BG needs more depth too, and it has way too much stuff in it. Sorry hun.

 

Looks a bit flat and you could try to merge Mario in a bit more

 

too busy man well what eternal said pretty much sums it up but yh Kanji deffinitely needs to go :d

Arden

 

Thanks for all of your replies, they have helped alot
Ill do the things you have said and when i remove the Kanji the sig will look a bit empty
So any suggestions what to replace it with?

 

C4Ds perhaps.

 

ok thanks