its actually really nice,decent flow and a nice feel.only thing i dont like is that bar on the bottom,but thats just my opinion
I like the coloured one more. Good effects, the text seems a little drowned out, even though you're not really supposed to focus on the text, it could use a little work. Good job on this one Verbal.
I really like the C4D use and the colors. Could have more of a bg, but it's pretty hawt as is. Well done. ^_^