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CNC, please.

ORIGINAL:
http://i258.photobucket.com/albums/hh269/G...pg?t=1206855733

 

Nice job, i dont like the Topaz on her face. and think the
right orange wing is missing something. IDK. NJ

 

Well if you knew what I could add that would be great.

Thanks alot for the feedback.

 

I think the orange things should flare at the top more. Make them more wing-like if you feel me.

 

I do.

Thanks for the feedback, appreciated.

 

oh wow did you vector the render ? its really good ! and i like the effects.
flow is a bit off -- i think ... well i dunno something bothers me about it but i rlly dunno .. maybe flaring wings would work better like what eternal said

 

I thought it looked like Krystal from Big Brother. It is. I never got to see her in --- Street.

 

I like it,
as said, make the orange things more like wings and it will look great, nice flow.

 

Thanks everyone.