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Maybe too much colors, not sure

 

Yea, as you said, too many different colors.
Add a bw version, it may looks better.
Some effects, especially on the right side are looking very oversharpened, blur those a bit.

The flow is pretty nice.

 

I actually kinda like all those colors, great flow, try b&w like strykor said

 

The effects look a bit sloppy. Its not that you have too many colors, its that they don't go well together. Try a few adjustment layers. :3

 

Maybe a B/W version?? I think it would go good

 

thanx for the replies, gonna try it out

 

Definately too many colors. I don't really think the style fits the render. Try adding some textures.

 

I say a BW version would be awesome. This one has too many colors, hun. The BW could be good though. ^_^