Yet, another tag... V.1 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ V.2 (B&W) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ C&C. Well, I think I am improving on my tags from when I started... Thanks for all your Tips / Comments / Etc.!
Remove the clipping mask at the left or there wont be a real focal. Add some depth in the background, for now it looks a bit plain. The smudging is pretty good.
I like the smudging and the colors, but its a bit plain. The right side of the color version looks awesome though.