I would like it with a white bg and a more definite flow to the pen tooling. ^_^ I know it's abstract, but I think it could work with more flow anyway. I think it's a WIP, but it's hawt stuff. Good job, hun.
When i look at it it seems to have flow to me --- Lol thats what i get for playing 5 hrs straight lmao .... But yeah it looks really good ! Especially for no c4d ! good highlights and shadows !