Smexy Women

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by _Soul Child_, Mar 26, 2008.

  1. Mar 26, 2008 at 2:32 PM #1
    _Soul Child_

    _Soul Child_ Well-Known Member

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    Vr1[​IMG]


    Vr2[​IMG]

    Cnc please..
     
  2. Mar 26, 2008 at 3:04 PM #2
    HOLLAstir

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    Fix typo, the kazuma text is creating another focal. Looks good, could use more depth. Light source seems a tad bit too harsh ^_^
     
  3. Mar 26, 2008 at 9:13 PM #3
    daedlus

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    the text and line s kinda ruin the feel..remove them it wil be great
     
  4. Mar 26, 2008 at 9:17 PM #4
    nanSTA

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    v1, typo is bad imo. Not bad nice job, i wouldve burned the sides
    and also anded more depthness
     
  5. Mar 26, 2008 at 11:18 PM #5
    _Soul Child_

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    Vr 3 [​IMG] Any better?
     
  6. Mar 27, 2008 at 10:44 AM #6
    Strykor

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    I would still remove the text.
    Btw. the flow is really nice.
     
  7. Mar 27, 2008 at 2:05 PM #7
    _Soul Child_

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    ^ thanks =)
     
  8. Mar 28, 2008 at 8:52 AM #8
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    v2
    lacks composition imo
     

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