Believe

I used one of the Tuts for this one.

 

What I would like to know is.

How did you go from this:



to that?


I don't know what tutorial you used, but it was certainly a bad one.
I suggest looking through the tutorials on this site and also look at the work other people have produced on this forum.
Also, Never use the pencil tool.

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Fix the typo ^_^ and the focal seems a little lq or over blurred <3

 

Its prettyt messy, lacks depth, a good render, a BG. You ll get better.

 

colors are bad
needs more flow

 

Not much flow or depth on this one hun. : /

Read some tutorials and work on your typographical skillz too. ^_^