You're just pumping out the tags aren't you? xD the typo is kinda creating multiple focals for me, and it's a little too messy for my personal taste, good job though <3
Oh yeah ! i would say it is a lot better. nice use of pen tool for the white lines on her left shoulder ! only problem would be it is a bit too bright for my taste and your name looks like it's lacking an "n" (anSTA) GJ !