R8

V1

V2

 

looks oversharpened and the white really hurts my eyes

 

Thanks for your input Faiien, I personally think I stopped caring for this one halfway through, I'll go back tomorrow and make some changes.

 

kz, best of luck

 

I agree the white made my eyes water haha :tongue: flow is cool though, but yeah re-post your other version when you can ^_^

 

Holy ----, turn the brightness the hell down!

 

Ahhhhhhhhhhh BRIGHT! Lol. If you fix that, it could be good. ^_^

 

Alright already! Lol. Will do. Thanks for the input guys, I'll post a V2 very soon.

V2 Posted!

 

Bump^

 

Its prety light m8. try toning it down with a soft black brush
on soft light or somthing.

 

Nice flow.
The effects are kinda over"brightened".

Although v2 is pretty better, I think the effect is still very bright.

 

Thanks for the comments guys, I'll have another go, and see what comes out of it.

 

v2
not feelin the left bg
otherwise looks nice

 

If you could make v1 with the colors of v2, it would be hawt. V1 is just too overpowering with so much white, but I personally don't like the effect placement or noice/sharpness of v2 as much as v1.

placement and quality of v1 with colors of v2 would be perfect IMO

 

looks over contrasted.. i like v1 tho
remove those splats on left