Checkered Cross

DeviantArt: http://littlelightning.deviantart.com/art/...-Cross-80999973

Note: This is my first Proper LP...

 

Muah, beautiful piece of work.

 

Thanks

 

the heart needs to be removed (seems random), the orange doesn't really compliment the other colors, the noise around the text should be removed as well and all in all it might be too simple and random >.<

not bad though a first though man, keep it up

 

I dont like the pink blob in the middle and it looks unfinished, try adding more features to it to give it that "finished" look.
But its good for a first

 

i liek the uniqueness of it, but i think if you added more randomness it would look cool.
nice job, and as Majin said pink is unfinished

 

Cool, thanks guys, I'll try and make a v2 including those thoughts . Randomness ftw.

 

Left a comment on DA.

 

Not likin the bg color or the noise round the text.

Maybe a super light yellow or a white bg would be more better. ^_^

Good work otherwise, LL.

 

Thanks for the comments and ty for the fav Fallen .