Juggernaut

V1


V2

 

bump

 

V2. V1 is way monotone and the text is distracting. V2, however, it works nicely. Work on your depth and blending of the render though. Lighting is pretty good though. Could be better. Flow is unclear. Is it radial flow?

^_^

 

yup, it's radial

 

Nice flow - i like radial flows because it gives good focus on the render.. yeah black and white is good.. shows the lighting better


text is good too ! i suck with text --- T_T

 

Color is too plain
compo can be better
text isnt needed

 

really really monotone here. its a little too basic and needs more of everything. composition, depth, and flow. try adding more FX and work on text a little, it could be a bit better. :]

 

Monotone like everyone else has said, try not to tilt your text if you can help it ^_^ B&W is nice though, work on depth <3

 

V2, read up on some more tutorials to get ideas for different FX

 

Text kills it a bit.
Try to remove it.
I like V2 more, the color is a bit too monotone.

 

v2
lovin lighting/bg/effcts gj